shot 510 - good opening shot, establishes action
shot 514 - range of different shots to establish action, has good opening but a bad end, dump it.
shot 515 - possible
shot 519 - a good Point of View shot
shot 522 - keep it
have running then do the opening credits sequence
give a reason, why is she running?
could have 2 girls.
if I go with the 2 girls:
have the two girls walking 1 brakes off the other goes into the woods.
have the sound of footsteps the one that goes into the woods is getting nervous e.g. gripping backpack or doing something with their hands
get a shot of feet going through a puddle (like shot 013)and walking along
have a shot of Little Red slowly getting faster then go into shot of L.R running away through the woods (shot 510)
use a close up or medium close up of portraits of girls looking anxious
they're aware that they may be being followed
possible shot of killer approaching?
or don't see the killer?
see feet go through water
sound of someone breaking a twig/branch?
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